Friday Fictioneers: FIRE AND ICE


PHOTO PROMPT © Dee Lovering

Fire and Ice

Curtis cranks the heat as he peers through the windshield. “What’s taking Duncan so long?”

I snort. “Can’t  handle his hot wings.”

Jenn twists in the passenger seat. “That’s not nice, Nora! You shouldn’t have challenged him.”

“I’m not running to the toilet, and I ate twice as many.”

“Finally!” Curtis fastens his seatbelt.

Duncan prances across the parking lot. The door opens, blasting icy air and snowflakes in my face. “Scooch, babydoll. It’s cold out!”

I slide across the backseat and crack my window. I may have agreed to date Duncan, but I didn’t agree to be called “babydoll.”

Friday Fictioneers (n): A world-wide community of writers addicted to writing 100 word stories based on a photo prompt provided by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields. 

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16 thoughts on “Friday Fictioneers: FIRE AND ICE

  1. Well written piece. Feels like a bit out of something else i.e. not so much a teaser or trailer, more a paragraph from a longer chapter. Are these characters you’ve used before?

  2. Ha Ha..Loved the end comment.. Have seen people who when they meet someone and after one or two meets, start calling them Babes… Same thought… Great one.. Cheers.. Rajesh

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